hey bro it's Ethan and I got some ideas on how you can improve your work👍. You might want to Add more information to your blog post because all I see is a video .And something about the steps you too. That's all i got for now and bye.👏
Hi Carlos, I agree with Ethan, a little bit of information about what you were doing would be good. I really would like you to spellcheck your blog posts next time too.
Talofa Lava Ethan, I'm Conroy from Waikowhai Primary School in Room Waitemata. I really enjoyed your video on this blog post about the definition on rhyming words, repetition and rhythm. Maybe next time you could explain a step by step guide to the process of the video so people know the know the steo by step process to how you made the video. I also think you could read more clearly and not mumble the words you read. Other than that this was a really good blog post. If you would like to visit my blog Click Here. Click Here..
hey bro it's Ethan and I got some ideas on how
ReplyDeleteyou can improve your work👍. You might want to
Add more information to your blog post because all
I see is a video .And something about the steps you too. That's all i got for now and bye.👏
Hi Carlos,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ethan, a little bit of information about what you were doing would be good. I really would like you to spellcheck your blog posts next time too.
Talofa Lava Ethan, I'm Conroy from Waikowhai Primary School in Room Waitemata. I really enjoyed your video on this blog post about the definition on rhyming words, repetition and rhythm. Maybe next time you could explain a step by step guide to the process of the video so people know the know the steo by step process to how you made the video. I also think you could read more clearly and not mumble the words you read. Other than that this was a really good blog post. If you would like to visit my blog Click Here. Click Here..
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