I learned that we can make a story/letter using a character instead of a story from my head.
the easy part was thinking of the letter, the hard part was translating it.
A resource I used to do my writing was my arms and cups cards.
Tuesday, 25 July 2017
Walt: write a letter using a chacteure decision
I learned that we can make a story/letter using a character instead of a story from my head.
the easy part was thinking of the letter, the hard part was translating it.
A resource I used to do my writing was my arms and cups cards.
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Hey Carlos,
ReplyDeleteIt's a shame you didn't get to finish this because your first paragraph really gives me an idea of your character's voice and shows the setting quite well. I am glad you have been using the arms and cups cards to help you revise and edit. Perhaps you can get a learning buddy to help check your spelling as well.
Regards,
Sally
Wow Carlos. What a great letter you have written. I think the way you started it with lots of short sentences made it really effective.
ReplyDeleteHello Carlos I was Impressed by your paragraph It hooked me on straight away.
ReplyDeleteNext time could you add Capital I's
Kind: Regard Johann